And with heavy heart, A smile painted on this tired, old woman's face, Struggling not to fall apart Yet, Hoping for a coup de grace I drag my broken limbs -
you have written some of the most heartfelt intense poetry here i have read in some time,, and i am so thrilled to have found you.. i did not stop to comment on every one because i was afraid to miss the rhythm of the next poem,, to forgo a moment of the time i had to bathe in the warm water of your words.. i have book marked this and your other site of kenyan stories,, and i promise you i will be back...
Thank you for your comments, Paisley. For a long time, I've been quite lazy and like almost every beginner poet, quite unsure about my writing. Your comments have inspired me. I'll be burning that midnight oil more often now!
Hi, i must admit your choice of words and sense of humour is striking. I have really liked your blog and thats why i have decided to follow. i will be checking thru and continue been entertained. i have also introduced two friends i hope soon they will get to follow.
i have a blog too and you can follow on: www.twohoursbefore.blogspot.com
8 comments:
you have written some of the most heartfelt intense poetry here i have read in some time,, and i am so thrilled to have found you.. i did not stop to comment on every one because i was afraid to miss the rhythm of the next poem,, to forgo a moment of the time i had to bathe in the warm water of your words.. i have book marked this and your other site of kenyan stories,, and i promise you i will be back...
Thank you for your comments, Paisley. For a long time, I've been quite lazy and like almost every beginner poet, quite unsure about my writing. Your comments have inspired me. I'll be burning that midnight oil more often now!
Pass by any time :-)
Hi,
i must admit your choice of words and sense of humour is striking. I have really liked your blog and thats why i have decided to follow. i will be checking thru and continue been entertained. i have also introduced two friends i hope soon they will get to follow.
i have a blog too and you can follow on:
www.twohoursbefore.blogspot.com
this great! i have admired your good poem mastery. visit me on my blog at Two Hours Before:
www.twohoursbefore.blogspot.com
Simon Mwangi Muthiora
Wow! That is the understatement of the year. Your poetry is so full of emotion. Thank you for allowing me to read it.
soldier on gallantly, Alexander doth call thee to the service... Beautiful words
wow! its my first time here, i love your poems and will certainly be back.
Welcome! Karibu! And asante, thank you for your comments.
Post a Comment